sing again
let my whole body
be
intoxicated
with your voice
i am addicted to you
your power over language
thrills the poet in me
sing again
my sweetness
let me sing with you
Author notes
prompt a. first contest piece in a while.
In a list
A contest entry
- Sing it Again by Randomly Beautiful.
400 points, ended November 17, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Indeed. Thank you for this.
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A beautifully constructed piece, that was a pure metaphor. I particularly liked this bit:
'your power over language
thrills the poet in me'
which I thought was very powerful.
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thank you ^^
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Very pretty love. Thank you. I will never stop singing.
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no baby. thank YOU. youve given me reasons to smile.
thanks angel. stay safe.
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I cannot read what the letters say on the side, but I did really like the poem. Love,
jin
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thank you ^_^
by my picture it says shadow; by his, shade.
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