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Learning

I hate the work
I hate the school
I hate the people
they make me drool
I hate the teachers
I hate the math
I hate the science
feel my wrath
and even though i hate them so
they are helping my knowledge grow
I hate the learning all together
but it will help me so whatever

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  • Queen Mab gold member
    November 6

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    lol... This is great. So classic high school. I remember those days all too well. Nice work on portraying the life and feelings of one in such a way.

    ~Mab

  • daprincess93
    November 6

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    Okay.... I was with you until you agreed with how they were helping you grow.
    For me since i moved I fell like I've become dumber for some reason!!1 I dont' think the school is making me grow./ I think what my old friends are saying,,,, that i'm changing and THEy THNK IT'S NOT FOR THE BEST BUT FOR THE WORST....


  • Syko Path
    November 3
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    lol i liked this it has a really nice flow and i can so totally relate!