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Commuter lament

I’m in motion
Climbing towards the sun
I’m in company
But we are strangers
Relying on the system
We sponsor

Autumn is making work
For the maintenance staff
It’s bright but cold
Like potions in a two tone bath

I am distracted by music
The sound of digitised rain
How kind of the man
To share his tastes

My back is up and rigid
He turns it off too late

02.11.09 01

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