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Giggle Fest

Just tickle and giggle and feel so good
Arm yourself with a sharp tickling stick
Make people laugh so hard harsh words cannot be said
Show the door marked with a huge exit
Push them out with a cheerful glee
Smother them with water to show who's boss
Wade through there words with a shovel of hope
Whisk out your trusty sword
Stand proud shove two fingers up
Tell them your name and make it so
They never forget you, you tickling fiend.

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 6

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    haha, very nice. This was such a cheerful poem I really enjoyed it thanks for writing it Best of luck to you in the contest



    -Steve-


  • Purush
    November 3

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    All the best in my contest---------

    "Make people laugh
    so hard or harsh words cannot be said
    Show the door marked with a huge exit
    Push them out with a cheerful glee.
    Smother them with water to show who's boss
    Wade through there words with a shovel of hope
    Whisk out your trusty sword
    Stand proud and shove two fingers up"

    a verse with a stout message
    All the best in my contest


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 3

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    hehehehehe..I have such a dirty mind at times
    "Whisk out your trusty sword
    Stand proud and shove two fingers up"..
    Not sure of the metaphoric reference here but these lines are golden
    wish you the best of luck..love & light..David