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capitulating to diminished pluralities

time serenades
heart parades

trumpet voluntaries
die in the wind as

silences of my trust




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  • Malabu
    November 13

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    this is beautifully sad..
    almost as if a serenade of thoughts parade
    in the ruffle of ribbons comes to my mind
    heartfelt this is
    congrates on the silver
    mal


  • Naridill
    November 12
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    I adore this.


  • penman gold member
    November 4
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    Excellent

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest


  • Mango Memories gold member
    November 3
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    Whimsical wit.