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Empty Revenge

The clock strikes one,
As the plan is set in motion,
He broke her heart,
And it was time for revenge,
She'd watch from a distance,
As his life was coming to an end,
He thought she'd simply recover,
Like all the girls before had done,
But he took her heart,
And destroyed her soul,
So all of her was gone,
Her conscience destroyed,
No more tears,
Erase her fears,
And eliminate what was left,
The gun fire sound,
Glass shattering everywhere,
Nothing left but a body,
And a girl left with her heart still shattered.

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ex-boyfriend...enough said

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  • Mr. Kodak
    November 4

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    he may have tore you down and broke your heart sweetie but i will be here forever and i will piece your heart back together with each others help it shall be accomplished....and this time i will glue it together so it cant be broke so easily..lol