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Was that worth £75?

Away on business, very boring
Money to spend, but nothing to buy
Horney, but no-one to relieve it
Advert in phone box, with number to call
Voice answers, Soft, Husky, Sexy

She gives details, he notes down address
He walks round, rings bell and waits
Maid answers, invites in
Shows into room, leaves

Girls come in and stand by the door
He looks them over, decides number four
Others leave, as she asks for the money
Get ready she says, as she leaves with his money.
He's naked, horney, cock at attention

She returns, looks at his cock
Smiles in appreciation, licks her lips
Removes clothes, just stockings remain
Move to each other, time to begin

He holds her, hands on her bottom
Her breasts against him, his cock against her
She reaches down, strokes his cock
He plays with her breasts, the nipples don't harden
She pulls away, he lays down on the bed

On his back, cock is ready
She picks up condom, undoes wrapper
Puts onto cock, rolls downto the end
She pick up some lub, fingers some into cunt

Astride him now, she takes hold of his cock
Lowering herself onto it, its all in her cunt
They both move together, fucking each other
She wants it over, more punters to see
He wants it to last, better value for money

He shudders and cums, only lasted 2 minutes
She doesn't cum, but groans in pretense
She quickly gets off, and dresses again
He dresses and leaves, wondering 'Was it worth it?'




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