Within my dreams most every night
I take the most fantastic flight,
into a world of rainbow hue,
from richest reds to softest blue
oh what a most amazing sight.
For here you'll see the fairies' light
they dance around with water sprites
and then they bow in laugh's delight
within my dreams...
Then gently flutters fairies flight
to sprinkle stardust from great height.
They keep my dreams forever new,
as I sleep soundly all night through.
For here is where all things feel right
within my dreams...
Author notes
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/rondeau.html
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A contest entry
- The "F" word... No, not that F word. by The Reapers Angel.
400 points, ended November 18, 27 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I've forgotten what a Roneau is supposed to be like but I enjoyed your poem and the journey into your dreams. Would that all dream were as sweet.
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Clappies didn't work
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I think the contest holder has said it all
Beautifully written -
Omg you must've read from my subconscious that the rondeau form was my favorite.
This is beautiful, amazing, incredible, and by far the best rondeau i've ever read. wonderful job well done here, thank you so much for entering. XD
Lol I love you now. XD
I would give you more clappys than three if i could.
~Angel
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ah, a nearly forgotten form, but a great one... and yours is so very, very fine indeed. Loved it, loved it! (I think it was created by Swinburne, no??)
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Excellent
Another amazing write. So very perfect in the use of the form. The very best in the contest
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