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To Roam the Rooms of His Realm

I roamed realms that jeopardized
my contact with a fearful world.
Some went insane,
their minds just swirled.
Some sternly said: It's God's domain!

I just observed and silently
grew thankful for the privilege.

But when I tried to verbalize
the impact on my very soul,
eyes showed disdain,
some lost control.
Some cautioned: It's where Angels reign!

I now have learned to simply smile,
return to rooms to rest a while.

The things I cannot
talk about
I cannot ever
be without.





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Blue Room, Marble Room and Brown Room. I can only tell spiritually mature souls about my divine experiences and gifts of God.

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  • parenchma
    November 10
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    room with a view...


  • neurosine gold member
    November 4

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    Once when I had a moment of lucidity, I felt everything, chairs, coats, flowers, had some expression to speak. I think we most often think this way about people, while the window is promising us a much better fortune. Sometimes people places and things are interchangeable when we see they all are screaming something.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 3

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    it has to be experienced

     

    but even each experience is so unique to the individual

    it is rearly understood

    even by those with great faith

     

    we are to step a side from our need to prove,

    truth never changes

    it is what it is

     

    it is in our heart

    it will always be

     

    inner hollows

    My Father has many rooms

    indeed!!!!!!!

    I find  that God and soul are in the inner most room

    so I 've heard

     

     

    love this and the ending is perfect

     

    I SAY SMILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

     

    God bless you my friend..

     


  • Denerica
    November 3

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    Light hearted, full of truth...just love the title and the whole beautiful concept, in our minds are many rooms, some to keep closed and those that He wants us to open...this was profound to say the least. Excellent. Blessings.


  • Amera gold member
    November 3

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    This is so true and I think one must be born again to really understand exactly what this poem is all about. Thank you for reminding me that I have something special.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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