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Gritted teeth, ragged gun






nothing is complicated
if you are a gun.
point-blank into distance
my tame silhouette
burst your bubblegum






























Author notes

Prompt;
the guilt tied to abortion.

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  • michael thomas
    November 12
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    congratulations on a well written poem and award.


  • Naridill gold member
    November 12
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    A choke through the gut. Stunning!


  • notorious
    November 3
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    I want to put this on my page.

  • oui


  • Amera gold member
    November 3

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    Truth and wisdom, bare and raw ...
    Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥

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