nothing is complicated
if you are a gun.
point-blank into distance
my tame silhouette
burst your bubblegum
Author notes
Prompt;
the guilt tied to abortion.
A contest entry
- Abortion; by Naridill.
539 points, ended November 12, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Review Desired
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congratulations on a well written poem and award.


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A choke through the gut. Stunning!
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I want to put this on my page.


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Coming from you, that is high praise.
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oui


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merci beaucoup
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Truth and wisdom, bare and raw ...
Well done!
Love,
Amera♥

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