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Seasons Turning



In Summer, sun doth warm the hours
and deck the world in lovely flowers 
The scent of which, so opulent (Assonant rhymes)
attracts the bee so obstinant
But Autumn's brisk wind comes a flailing ((Alliterated rhymes)
sending leaves and petals falling
Turning all to golden brown (Consonant rhymes)
and robbing fields of flowers gown
Then soon all dress of trees are lost (Consonant rhymes)
as winter covers them with frost



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  • Tracee gold member
    November 3
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    lovely

    lovely poem and really good tips thank you