The stars shine every night
but baby your heart is my only light
we meet our eyes, my heart skips a beat
i warm your skin with this radiation of heat
That travels within me every time we meet
You glance at me when im not looking
Each and every time you spot me smirking
Thinking of how much iv fallen, deeply in love
Looking up i thank the angels above
For granting me happiness in the arms of you
For i truley hope this love is pure and true.
I LOVE YOU ~x~
What did you think of my poem? comment please =]
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Your i's should be capitalized, in the 8th line, I think "iv" should be "I've", and I'm not positive on this one but I think in the last line "truley" should be "truly". Other than that, I think you did a lovely job on this and it's a terrific write.
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