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Perched on Peals of Light

my heart is a darter
shaking its feathers
to peals of light

soon the flutes of love
attract others
in motionless flutter

dance upon the candle-foot
of Life

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 8
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    Just beautiful! Such wonderful words. Thank you so much for your entry
    Gaylene


  • paul claxton
    November 5
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    just lovely,well done


  • Cannonsfire
    November 3

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    We all need to let go and just let a moment spin us C


  • Amera gold member
    November 3

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    Amazing how your mind works! You teach me so much about poetry without realizing it. You deserve the most original prize for the year!

    love,
    Amera