Slowly run my fingers through her hair.
Softly whispering love spells in her ear.
Gently kissing her neck,
Tenderly caressing her breasts.
Working down her legs,
Gently nibbiling up into her thighs.
Finger tips gracefully massage her hips,
My tongue teasing her clit.
Hands upon my head,
She lets out long gental breaths.
Diligently arching her back,
Her nails dig into the silken sheets.
Tilting her head and closing the eyes,
She lets out soft cries.
A single tear sweeps down her cheek,
As she slowly cums in my mouth.
Swallowing the slighty sweet and salty juice,
My tounge eargerly searches for more.
Slowly working the sides,
Before slipping inside.
She squeezes her thighs together,
As her body quietly shutters.
Softly whimpering my name,
The final jerks let out.
Entangling in a naked bond,
We watch the midnight stars.
Comments
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I think line 8 would be better if it were my tongue rather than the tongue.. Im not sure... sometimes I think I am too critical of you poems but I like them all the same. I dont think I will ever be able to go into my computer room again! ahhh! you have contaminated it! writing about sex in there!
I like the last line. I knew you were a sweetheart even though you try to hide it


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Diligently arching her back
Her nails dig into the silken sheets
I think it's a very realistic account of love play
Swallowing the slightly sweet and salty juice
tells of the sweet experiences

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