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this is where a poem should be



instead this page is filled with emptiness
silence lies lonely on a sheet of white
screaming with no medium to carry its voice
completely unable to express itself











perhaps this is where a poem is


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  • Ken-Maverick
    November 3

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    I remember doing something quite similar to this,
    it does send a strong message doesnt it?
    Wonderful.

    Ken


    • alivefromlove
      November 3
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      wait, you did something similar to this? i didnt accidentally steal your idea did i? if i did it was completely coincidence.


  • Blood N Tears
    November 3
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    I liked this..... very very thought provoking