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that robot broke

that robot broke
it gasps it chocks
the missing spokes
poke holes in fabric
your references are old and moat

can you tell what I'm thinking so I know you understand?

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  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 11
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    Well done!


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 7

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    this makes me remember my mum as she sat stitching weddin gowns for a living....she would say...you ant rely on a machine...if it goes haywire...the groom won't wait...lol...thanks...I like this
    T


    • Matt Holck
      November 7

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      I can't believe my poetry has become so desperate as to post these quips.
      As it was cast out where comments can be pushed down,
      I put it on my own where it can not so easily by thrown away.