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Eternal Memory.

So delicate,
A mere sight of joy.
Echoing cries of happiness
As you hold onto that precious moment.
That’ll be stored deep as a memory
For eternity.

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27 Words.
Prompt: Hearing your baby cry for the first time.

Hope you like; I tried

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  • broken-n-shattered
    November 5
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    wow that was beautiful. great write


  • HugsForEveryone
    November 4

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    WOW! That made a great image in my head, I could just imagine a cute little baby face ^-^
    BTW - CONGRATULATIONS ON THE *GOLD* TROPHY!! What's even more exciting is there was only one winner!! So great job ^-^;
    ~SexBomb


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    November 3

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    Oh wow this is a short yet beautiful write so filled with love. It makes me anxious to meet my second child, she will be here soon enough though. Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest.


  • Naznomarn
    November 3
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    awwah ^^ cute


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    November 3

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    aww sweet write my lil cupcake
    Good luck

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