Come play with me daddy!
Please pretty please
Your not too busy
Phone calls can wait
Look at my doll house
And this is barbie
Isn't she pretty daddy?
I have a pet bunny
And a kitty too
They live in my room
Only I can see them
Can I have a puppy?
Play dress up with me
Like my sparkle dress?
I have a tiara
It lights up
Lets run outside
I don't need a coat
Catch me, catch me!
Faster daddy faster
Run and play with me
A contest entry
- Tell me what this speaks to you. Semi Quickie. by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended November 10, 5 entries
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Comments
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brillant.


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Great
It takes me back to 3 years old in my son's shoes. I am gonna play with him now, you got into his head for me

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This makes me think of a little girl desperately trying to get her father's attention. Its really well written.



