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re-addition - Serial Coated Jane

These words slowly drip like icing
            i sing about a thing that which was recommending
through therapy and other things
                                that made me think
                there was something pink
        in my sink
                        like


                              blood

in writing,
                    write me
            a secret, write me
                    a fairytale exposed to please me

there.

blooming cheek bones (through decay)
and cyber metal upon one owns' (still shows today)


deteriorating thoughts of aluminum.


tattered hip bones
i think i'm getting old


            whilst i slither along autopsy tables
                    i can't wait to meet you Abel
                world's first killing, were your cords disabled
are your wires all unstable?


2.23.07

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i don't even freaking know.

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  • Mr-Nevers gold member
    November 5

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    Very abstract, industrial and enchanting in a way. 'A fairytale to phase me' and 'Slithering across the autopsy table.' Excellent lines. I'm not quite sure what it's about though I see Biblical references. It could be something of a deluded state of mind after being drugged up after some sort of operation. It could be something different and surreal all on its own. Writing in blood is always macabre. Kind of reminds me of a cross between Alice in Wonderland and Trick r' Treat.