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gone

slash slash
take a gash
strawberry gashes all over her body.

slice slice
take a knife
cuts of many across her wrtists.

bam bam
goes the gun
blood of crimson across the floor.

well..?

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  • WideEyedSuicide
    November 3
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    Well, it could have been much better. But I'll give you some credit it was very, creative.