Where no teller begs
the profits
of soul expression
on paper.
A random thought
in circular motion
bumps the square thought
located between
the Left ear,
and the Right.
The flow of poetry,
where the mind and heart
gather energies
forming silent words
on paper
that reads a tune
of Self!
Author notes
Prompt:
what do you think poems are? what does the music in poetry do?
Picture Credit: Sea_of_Thoughts_by_Aes_Aelin - At Deviant Art
http://aes-aelin.deviantart.com/art/Sea-of-Thoughts-35711806
A contest entry
- poems are fingers by just mercedes.
800 points, ended November 18, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What comes to mind...?
Comments
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Wow...such brilliant thoughts put on paper....love it...Keep penning, hun! My first read of yours and I will be back!
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Very profound & thought-provoking...
I like it!! And I really like your new pen-name(!!) 
I wish you the best of luck in the contest, and keep your quill flowing, Poet... 
Peace & Hugs Always,
Your AP Mom (Cyn)
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Thanks Momma Just so you know, I will be using my new ap name soon.. Using once upon a mind, to print off my older poetry
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or not.. lol. So undecided!
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Thank you for this entry into the contest. I like the picture you linked - the waves remind me of Hokusai, the image and the poem have a Zen quality that I like
the tension of a rich simplicity -
PS.
your poem is a great compliment to the "Sea of Thoughts" illustration you directed us to! -
I like your poem!
...but I REALLY like your "nom de guerre", Map of the Stars!
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Beautiful description of what poetry is and what it means to us.
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"A random thought in circular motion"
I really like this line! This is bright and airy. Good stuff!
I also really like the pic you have posted with this poem. I think it captures the message very well.
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Excellent
What a terrific write. So very well written. Best of luck in the contest
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