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Oh

The big zero

O

find your point in the line of the circle
that intersects

stare across the open space

circumspect

spin sphere

so dizzy in here

touching on the emptiness

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  • arafura gold member
    November 3
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    Very clever write! I think I see what you are pointing at... but it's hard to focus on the big zero. Great work!


  • Abbey Normal
    November 3
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    Quite mysterious. I love poems that leave me wanting more.

    I see a story behind this piece... "touching on the emptiness".