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Even though you hate it when I say I like they way you kiss

jumbled
like a football Peyton just fumbled

trampled
like a piece of ass you just sampled

cold
like those handcuffs you have tight around my soul

alone
like a king on his throne



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  • Naznomarn
    November 3

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    Mmm i like
    And i like the use of words to start each section. nicely done