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I really wish you would...

I really wish you would...

"bring me to earth from flight

I am indulging

about you, for long time

to stir myself"

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Here: I really wish you would...

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 3

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    Sweet...I like the flow and you followed the prompt in a different direction then I would have thought to go. Great work my friend. ~gypsy~


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    November 2
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    Nice write! Loved it.


  • islekine gold member
    November 2

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    Thanks for entering!

    Best wishes in the contest...and always!
    Write on and on...

    and

  • islekine gold member
    November 2
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    Nicely penned!


  • Xianaria gold member
    November 2

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    This made me smile, I enjoyed the read.
    Best wishes in the contest!

    ~ Tim

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