[I really wish you would]
Hold my hand,
kiss me in the rain,
show me that I'm yours,
make me whole again.
Author notes
Of course the first person I thought of was my boyfriend when I saw what I had to finish lol...hope this is okay. 
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A contest entry
- 8 poets...15 minutes...17 words... by islekine.
700 points, ended November 3, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is jst something we all want within the world but it is what we all are in search for. we might sometimes find ourselves spending our whole life to get to this point to.
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Awwww I didn't know....Okay pucker up baby I'm comin' in just let me wet my lips first.... slobber - slobber okay i'm ready.... hahaha.
This is a great poem for the prompt and I see you took home an HM. Well done my friend.
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Lol, now may I borrow a tissue so I can wipe my face.
Jk...Ty for the comment!
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i like this your words are flowing well and you can feel it even though it is short
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I love it!
Thanks...great take...
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...
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Ok ?
Damn good , whoa ! I love this !
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Thanks!
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Thank you!
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Ok, the pic made me smile...the rest just awww'd me...Gorgeous write!
Best wishes in the contest!
~ Tim
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Thanks!!
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Love this... *meh* torn up in unrequited love!! lol and yeah, dead on, I am waiting and wondering and worrying tonight... not unusual....
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Thank you hun!
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Excellent
What a great write, so very loving, best of luck in the contest
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Thank you very much.
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Something that I think we all long for in life. To be wanted, accepted, and feel complete. Nice thoughts here and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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Yes it is, and thanks for the commented.
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