you would look at yourself
through my eyes ~
for then you'd see
how truly beautiful you are
...to me.
I really wish
you would look at yourself
through my eyes ~
for then you'd see
how truly beautiful you are
...to me.
you would look at yourself
through my eyes ~
for then you'd see
how truly beautiful you are
...to me.
Author notes
Finish this line:
I really wish you would...
17 words
For my Love
Joe Cocker
You Are So Beautiful
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7wRCWcQVSJI
In a list
A contest entry
- 8 poets...15 minutes...17 words... by islekine.
700 points, ended November 3, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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How very sweet and loving this is!
What a tribute to your lady love and congratulations on your bronze; very much deserved!!!
Wishing you light and love,
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Awww, so very sweet Best of luck!!
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Thank you!
~ Tim
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I like you approach on the prompt, T...you romantic soul....It is most impressive a little write...all the best in the contest!
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Thank you, Rosemary!
It's hard not to be romantic when your muse keeps you constantly...Oh, how did she put it? She said I had the moon in my eyes!
~ Tim
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Ahhh sweet!
Thanks for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always!
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Thank you!
It was the first thing that came to mind, so I went with it!
~ Tim
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Whoa ! After I read all your entries I don't deserve to be in this contest !
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You're was just beautiful, you belong here!
~ Tim
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I love this! great work with the prompt and so much said in so few words! good luck and nice job!
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Thank you! Altho I do wish we had at least...5 more words?
~ Tim
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lol you go over? I didnt notice
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Nope, I said I wish I had more words
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Well when you are in love there are never enough words ;p
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Exactly! I'm not sure how many, but my Love has around 80 poems now since July
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heh, well I don't dare count mine! But he seems dissinterested! Heartache seems the best damn muse there is >.<
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Excellent
Such a beautiful write. so perfect for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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Thank you
For some reason I have a Joe Cocker song playing in my head now, tho!
~ Tim
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Very beautifully written my friend! Way to go with this prompt and good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826
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Thank you, Jeremy!
I greatly appreciate your compliments!
~ Tim
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Oh my! This is beautiful. You did a brilliant job with this. I really love it. Great write hun, and good luck in this contest...This is truly beautiful!
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Thank you My muse is brilliant, I just write what I feel about her!
~ Tim
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