birdie on your perch
to balance upon the birch
cautious not to lurch
A contest entry
- BIRD ON A BRANCH HAIKU by Swan song.
800 points, ended November 7, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Featured Visions through Haiku poet
Not the usual unrhymed haiku but an interesting study and reaction to a picture prompt. In your unique way I think you have captured the moment quite effectively. Well done.
Dennis
P.S. Just catching up on the past sellection of featured group poets.
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Wonderful
Cute. You always are so great a forms. Best of luck in the contest
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Thanks, it is just a silly haiku. LOL
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Liked the picture and haiku...You are good at everything you do...
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lol that was cute and it rhymed but still in a way is a haiku in my humble opinion
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Nice pic. And poem of the birch and rhyme.
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nice haiku with a rhyming twist..I like it
..haiku and nature goes hand in hand..you made this your own with the personal touch
wish you the best of luck..love & light..David
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Not usually my preference, but I enjoyed the length and rhyme.
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Thanks for dropping by to read.
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