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listening is all about

 

 

 

 

 

rustle in air
weaves a music
as small breeze caress skin,
falling leaf is silent
yet foretells volumes behind.

a brook, running deer, passing clouds
voice musings,
into hearing ear
and vulnerable heart.

crimson red in west
foretells fondness of sky to earth.
adieu for short while
is a great weight
hearts  can't bear
with all hues have silent decibels.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

though you are mourning

and grieving your loss,

death died a long time ago.

--

Michael W. Smith

"This Is Your Time"

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  • ZachP silver member
    November 19

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    you have such beautiful images here; dear poet!
    Just amazing . . . absolutely amazing.
    The softness and tenderness of your words is something else.
    Thank you for sharing! I wish you the best.

    Zach Estel.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 3

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    Amazingly beautiful. I loved the imagery and the flow. It had such a beautiful rhythm too. Great piece of art. Hope you do well in the contest. ~Gypsy~