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The Air We Breathe

Dare I breathe
As I unravel at the seams
Reading every blank page
With a faltering mind
And I form
Every heart beat seeking
Another
As if we could ever be more
Than the air we breathe

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  • maktub
    November 2
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    Beautiful! I enjoyed it more than you can imagine...i shall read more of your work, definitely....