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In my dreams

It's a perfect silence
The moon is bright
The stars a shining
Blinding sight

The music's soft
While we dance slow
Lost in our dreams
Under the sky's glow

My heart is pounding
I'm losing control
I can't help but say it
Je t'aime toi trop

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