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Glass Shards

The steam is finally clearing
Now my reflection's what i see
But it's not a pretty sight
It doesn't look like me

How could i ever become
Something so out of control
How did i end up like this
Stuck in this black hole

I punch the mirror using all my strength
Then stare at all the crimson blood
And all the shattered glass
Tears start pouring down my face
As i welcome in the pain
I wish i'd never started
This never ending game

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