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Yaki Imo (Baked Sweet Potato)

imo
imo dayo
the sweet song of the sweet
potato vendor sings out through
the street

Author notes

a fall treat

A contest entry

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  • waydownuponjoy
    November 7

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    Loved It !

    Sweet potato pie ... sweet potato souffle ... sweet potato anything ...
    and so to hear this song would be a sweet treat that would stir this chefs imagination! j y


  • azure85 gold member
    November 7

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    This is a wonderful cinquain and shows a seasonal delight that many must look forward to partake of. Thank you for you lovely cinquain, it is one you can hear them singing as the lines progress in the reader's mind.