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A Time, A Thought

There once was a time when i thought i could not be hurt
A time when i thought i was free of pain
A time of ultimate happiness
How could i have ever thought i was rid of all the pain
To think that i was immune to it
To hope for that which i could not really hold on to
I thought we could fix this
To go back to the way things were
And yet is seems like ages since we last talked
You won't answer my calls
You ignore me and treat me as if i don't exist
You've brought back an old pain yet it feels new
You've opened an old wound and added salt
Why did you do this to me

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I would like to be your AP Husband if thats ok with you.
t i r e d o f l i f e

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  • Tainted-Faith
    November 9

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    Darn. Im crying. I know its not for or about me, that it has nothing to do with me.
    But it spoke the words i can never write. Well done.
    Jezz


  • Denerica
    November 3

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    Heartache is not fun, the pain is astronomical and to be ignored as if you went bad like rotten fruit is tough. You captured the endurance, the struggle within along with your delicate, emotional write. Well done. Blessings.

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