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Judged

lost everyone I loved
because I was judged.
You cut out my heart.
Your words ripped me apart,
and you didn't hold back at all.
I feel so used.
How you justified youself against my views.
I called you friend for years,
and you repaid me with tears.
you don't think your judgements hurt,
but this pain is so real,
and someday I hope you feel,
the lonliness inside,
how I'm barely staying alive.
The betrayal and labels,
being restricted with cabels
of words and judegments.
I tried so hard to live up to you,
and everything you do,
but that's not who I am.
And not someone I will ever be.
So one day you'll see,
You can't change me wit judging,
but you can lose me.

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  • lifelines
    November 8
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    you could feel all of the emotion in this. it was rly good. and i can see everything your getting at. great job!!!

    • erinXrose
      November 8
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      aww thank you. the emotion should be evident i mean i was like bawling when i wrote this, that was not one of my best days.

  • loved it! the emotion and the feeing u get from reading it is amazing!

  • uhmazing:)

    this is awesome. it's very well written and the emotion is evident in every line. loved it(: