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Suicide Poem

Stream of tears fog my sight
While you're fucking some cunt tonight.

I hope you're happy having multiple orgasm
While the door shuts in this private chasm.

I hope your betrayal paid
May you find contentment in getting laid.

Savor every moment of euphoria
While I drown myself in melancholia.

While you doze in your private paradise
I slowly uncover Death's disguise.

I hope you get dizzy with her kisses
While my falling stars die and slay my wish.

I hope you're getting everything in your wish list
While I sharpen the razor to cut my wrist.

I hope you won't regret your betrayal
When you pay me a visit in my funeral.

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Dray I. Disaster

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  • prankstar
    November 12
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    wow. so angry. amazing. Thank you for entering.

    ---prankstar


  • savemysoul
    November 10
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    ahhhhh. loved thiss. a word for everyone that's been cheated on. and shows us all that we're better than them..a bit of a dark poem, but that's what i loved. great write. thanks for entering and good luck.

    -- jordan.

  • danii9809
    November 4
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    very beautiful. i like dis, realllllly

  • danii9809
    November 4
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    very beautiful. i like dis, realllllly


  • Fr33BirdFaLLin
    November 3
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    Very nice write, good job and good luck.

  • this was pretty good~

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