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Paralyzed

Paralyzed by the words spoken
Just want to take more for another day
Connected to all the rest
Wasted on the school of illusion
A world ruled by the price that is paid
Picking up the pieces that don’t fit
Nothing else is left to say

Paralyzed by the things that are done
It all comes out when the emotion is stale
Sitting in the middle where people exist
Never taken away and always for free
Forever to understand the sound
Assisted by the need to know
Always much more to do

Paralyzed by the feelings in thoughts
Suddenly it all seems to have changed
Departure of the crowded hollows
Conscience controlled by ill desire
Misunderstandings led by every intention
Feeling from the heart of awareness

Paralyzed by living for a lie

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