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When a late blooming rose
is taken by the cool crystal frost,
Is it a pity?
For the frost brings with it
a New Beauty,
Refreshing, revitalising
and more desirous
because of its absence,
And long awaited presence.

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I'm still to choose a title. Nothing I think of seems to fit properly. Any suggestions welcome.

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