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cool tempers and warm embraces

Like a drifting leaf
in autumn show
my love goes insane
with shipwrecked thoughts
and forlorn ideas
closely brandishing their arms
to eliminate my passion for her.

Though I knew no nuances
in spreading my affection
I sincerely pray for her
cool tempers and warm embraces

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  • Kathraina gold member
    November 15

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    Very lovely words you've penned here! I love the tone of this piece, it reaches my heart effortlessly and unfolds like a newborn flower. Marvelous job with this write!


    Bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate