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Garden of Broken Glasses

[V1]
We've come a long way
Since love found its way
And each day we grow
As we let our feelings flow
We've crossed the stars
We've fathomed the sky
Though sometimes love's a war
We won't let each other die

Chorus:
Kick your shoes off my love
And hold my hand
Let's take a barefoot walk
In the garden of broken glasses

[V2]
We have tasted pain
And we have danced and kissed in rain
If this life will end we will meet again
For God had intervened
and destined us to meet
No one can stop the fire that heavens set
We deserve everything we get
There's nothing we should regret

Chorus:
Don't watch your steps my dearest one
As long as you're holding my hand
Be carefree love and just walk
In the garden of broken glasses

[V3]
Lost in each other's ritmo
We float in seventh heaven as we say te amo
The road of love is paved with thorns
But we'll stick together like we've sworn
Baby, enjoy the ride, stay by my side

Chorus:
Let's bleed together hon
And keep holding onto each other's hand
Forget our pains and continue to walk
In the garden of broken glasses

Oh, hold my hand
And walk with me
Oh, walk with me
In the garden of broken glasses

Oh...
In the garden
of broken...
Of broken glasses

Author notes

I've written the lyrics during my holiday at my granny's farm (Nov.1). I brought my guitar and finally composed a song for my Mom and her one and only beloved.... my papa XD

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  • silverscent gold member
    November 15
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    Some very decent lyrics here. But I'm not sure if "the garden of broken glasses" is somewhere I want to go. Sounds pretty painful to me.
    Great job anyway. Thanks for entering.


  • findingurself.less
    November 13
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    I like this! It seems to flow really well and is all together a great write! I LOVE lyrics! It isn't as personally geared toward me as I was looking for in the contest, but regardless, it is awesome! Be proud!


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    November 9
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    Amazing

    ... I love it!

    This much lol...


  • TormentedPhantom gold member
    November 5

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    This is filled with pain and sadness. Many I am sure can see themselves or loved ones here in your lyrics. Thank you for sharing.

  • JToddUnderhill
    November 3

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    Nice...

    .... By just reading the lyrics I could see this being a song my daughter (13 year old) would love. I am still in to new music but I hang out with a rare bunch of singer / songwriter types. To experience what I mean I could email you a link to their youtube stuff if you would like.

  • This is really good, i loved every verse. What genre is it?

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