In the saddest moment
I searched for you
but you were not there
You said you cared
But your door is locked
and you are inside
I read your words of love
and listened to your comments
You even said your cared
In my saddest moment
I was alone
you were not there
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you never really get the answers you want then, i don't know why that drive me more crazy then being alone, but this is a sad poem as the title states, keep it flowing
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my heartstrings are yanked
Oh my God this is so sad. Obviously, the title fits perfectly. This is really sad though, it got to me, and now it's under my skin. The repetition was used tastefully and I love how the poem falls back on itself at the end with, "you were not there". Well done! Amazing poet!
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impressive poem, you touched my heart, so I'm sending you a hug...well written...Leaf
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this is sad but very beautiful. i like it
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You seem to be putting a lot of doors in your poems lately.
This poem kind of pulls at my heart strings. You seem to be writing about sadness quite frequently too. I always found it easiest to express sadness and loneliness in poems.
I liked how you didn't use punctuation. When I do that, it makes my poems run together and the quit making sense, but yours seems to clarify this poem for me. I dunnno how to explain it exactly. It makes it make more sense.
Keep up the excellent writing, Dear Poet. Keep your chin up.
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