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2AM-Lovesick

It's 2AM and I haven't slept a wink
Thoughts of you are too consuming
You've enter my heart and mind just like a shrink
The way we talk as you hold my hand..
Our love is a guitar and my heart holds the strings
A beautiful song he started to play
Then something happened a ways down the road
This beautiful love started to unravel and unfold
You grew away from me
But my love for you was rooted deep like a tree
Then you found her
I became cold like a winters night. Please leave me sir.
Tried telling everyone it was ok
They all knew this was a lie, broadcast like a play
That lonely girl has never been the same
Emotional scars are deep. Physically seen on her vein
She started to write him a letter
Hoping it would make things better
She woke in a field a thousand miles away
This is the only thing she knew how to say
"It's 2AM and I'm still love sick over you,
Your the only thing that makes gray skies blue
Now its too late to tell you,
I love you"

Author notes

This is meant to be partnered with "No More Tears" which is my "letter" to him

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 4
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    Good write

    I know this feeling too well and you have brought out the feelings of loss of love from another .

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 3
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    Thank you for your heartfelt write, good luck in my contest, Josie