Not even a glance.. nor a glare.
I wait for you endlessly.. do you even care?
My heart is breaking slowly and in pain...
I write "I love you" Across my heart.. but still, its full of shame.
Sometimes I wish you would pick me,
Im what you want.. I can be what you need.
I'd never think I 'd be in love..
Until I met you, now my heart soars above.
I cry silent tears, I bleed black blood,
My heart had been ripped, my soul has been crushed.
You walk on my shattered, bleeding black heart..
Can't you see your tearing me apart??
You are all I wanted.. all I need.
Your the guy I've been waiting for, the right one for me.
No one can compare, your my life's wait.
Now I can tell, you were just a fake.
If you open your eyes wide, you will see.
The obvious love that you really need.
I may not be perfect, I may not be small but
I am the girl you've been wanting so long.
Why can't you see were perfect together?
If that were to happen, things would get better.
I want to be her, the girl you will love..
The one that you miss.. the one that you'll hug.
I guess I'll just wait, My heart set on time..
I'll never be sure if you'll ever be mine.
I'll just wait in silence, I must wait in pain.
The love I really want, will never want me.... *sighs*
Author notes
Hmmm.... I tried.. don't like it? Yeah me neither.. *sighs*
A contest entry
- I like to think you love me.. by Coloured Skies.
400 points, ended November 15, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Just make it amazing! by X.brokenlover.X.
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Eh... Whatever..
Comments
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"Sometimes I wish you would pick me,
Im what you want.. I can be what you need.
I'd never think I 'd be in love..
Until I met you, now my heart soars above."
I love this! i've often found myself asking the same question about why i've not the perfect girl someone likes. but i finally found someone who thinks i'm perfect
anyway GREAT write! thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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"I cry silent tears, I bleed black blood,
My heart had been ripped, my soul has been crushed.
You walk on my shattered, bleeding black heart..
Can't you see your tearing me apart??"
I love this stanza! I can feel it!! -
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Hehe thanks. =] I mean it's not the greatest poem.. I just tried for a friend's contest.
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