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Continuously Free Falling

So I'll sew on this smile,
pretending it doesn't bother me.
Whispers of the truth will fade
pleading the fifth as they depart.

My eyes will tell a fairy tale
ending in happily ever after,
but my heart will tear in two
with just one quick glance.

I thought I had built the fence strong,
protecting my heart from your lines.
But with each smooth word and sexy look,
the wooden pieces collapsed one by one.

And I will continue to put on the front,
acting as though the feelings never existed.
As you continue to pull me closer
with no intent of actually grabbing on.

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I might just swear off men forever.

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  • Stickboy
    November 2

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    lol not laughing at the poem but your notes... I told you I need to start that contest looking for a good redneck man to teach twightdazzles her place is barefoot and pregnant in the kitchen fetchin his beer