they hug they kiss they tell each-other i love you.while he watches with a pained look he has no choice but to be happy for them it is what a friend would do.but inside he is slowly dieing on the inside he lays in bed all he can see is those two together.it stings like a needle going into his skin. he trys to stand but is pushed down by the thought of them together.he wants to end his life but people stop him.so he has no choice but too watch them be happy together he wants to say how he feels but dosen't in the end he cry's himself to sleep every night.they
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it is what it is i will work more on this poem as this whole things moves on
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This is deep. Sorrowful. I like it.
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Chris....I'm sorry....
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aww :(
makes me want to cry and hold him close its sooo sad but really good
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deep and beautiful
I love it...keep it up!! You could be as good as my hero, Edgar Allan Poe. Keep up the great work!!! -
moses
this is deep...im ashamed that i haven't read more of your stuff.everybody at one time felt this way so its ok.identify these feelings is the first step to feeling better.imma keep checking you out ok little bro
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I'm so sorry you feel this way. I sort of know how you feel. I really like my best guy friend, but he doesn't know (and probably never will b/c I'm not going to tell him. I'd rather have him as my friends than not have him at all) and when he gets a gf I'm going to be devastated.
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White rose wolf
AWW i'm sorry brother i know how you i been there to but thier is someone out there jsut for you nice poem i love to read the rest -
you did a fantastic job, it is great. i am sorry if these are your true feelings, you should let ur feelings be known, just so they can have an idea of how ur feeling. its not good for u to keep these big feelings inside of you, to hide them. i hope things get better for you!! im here if u want to talk
Liz
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