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Tainted Love

i can't imagine my life without you
i dont know what i would do
i look deep into your eyes
all i want to do is cry
when i'm around you
i get totally confused
when im without you
all i want to do
is to be with you again
so i dont have to go searching
for something that doesnt exist
this shit is making me pissed
you dont know whats happening
you dont know why im crying
it's cause my heart's been broken in two
its even been trampled and bruised
all because of some dude
that doesnt even know you.

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