Just live your life.
Hold onto it tight.
Make the best of what you can.
I'm hoping that you'll understand.
We wanna do so much now.
But they tell us-
"When you're stronger, when you're younger, when you're older."
Anything to get us to stop.
They don't understand.
It's just a simple command.
Live your life, hold onto it tight.
Just let it out. Live your life.
I live a lonely life, a lonely one, a lonely one.
You know that, did you just forget that?
Should I repeat that? You know that.
Just live-your-life.
Just live it.
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Author notes
This is meant to be sung by me, in a tune of a mix of "Party in the USA", Potential Breakup Song and a tune I made up.
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wow. i loved the message this gave out. it's the type of message i keep telling people but riecently have stopped believing in myself. this is helping me to change my mind again because i know you are write.
Just live your life.
Hold onto it tight.
Make the best of what you can! -
Wow! I liked they way it played in my head. It makes me want to hear it in your voice.
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Good message hon...coming from your young heart, alot os wisdom...Keep penning hon...Grandma
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Yes we need to seize the day, hold onto life and make the most of it. Good lyrics. Our lives can be very fullfilling given the chance
Good work
Dee
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Excellent job at relaying your feelings. Very well penned. Keep it up.
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I enjoyed this song. I like 'Party in the usaa' by Miley Cyrus. Lovely song. Life is important
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Good
I really liked it. Some parts through me off a little like where you talk about living a lonely life. But I can fullly understand where you are coming from with this poem and it def. is a poem people should relate to.
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