Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

after the storm

I sit here
and stare blankly
as the empty space
nestled between
the sculpted border of this window
swallows me,

and I wonder if any word
will articulate the brevity
of your absence.

I feel free again,
but I will never feel
trust, rushing into the corners
of my mouth.

No, you
were the stove, and I
was just a child
trying to get closer
to the idea of
heat.


There is a deafening hum outside,
I think it is a helicopter
but inside I always wonder
if it is the messiah, coming back
to tell me I was wrong.

Well, I always am.


Author notes



Juxtaposed thoughts.

I don't fucking care what you think anymore

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • notorious gold member
    November 3

    Edit | Reply
    "articulate the brevity
    of your absence."
    I don't think 'brevity' has ever had a better meaning.
    For me, it's got a ... "It's not worldly significant that you're not here, but it is to me" vibe. Diggeth it.

    "trying to get closer
    to the idea of
    heat."
    CLEVER.

    ;


  • David. Enjoy.
    November 2
    Edit | Reply
    Beautifully done. I'm slackin' off. :\