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Short Rhyme of the day-01-

 

 

I love with heart, to god I pray
and yet those pearls will never stay.
It broke my smile, I saw decay
a tooth fell out and spoiled this day.


 

(2.11.09)

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yup, another one bites the dust.... 21 teeth to go.

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  • JToddUnderhill
    November 25
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    Yeah...

    .... I feel you pain right around the same time you have this dated I was getting $1000 worth of dental work done to save my own smile. At this point I would say it is a 50 50 split 50% real 50% mand made but at least I can have beef jerky again. That's what years of drug abuse and low self esteem got me!


  • Tzipora
    November 9
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    It broke my smile, I saw decay
    a tooth fell out and spoiled this day.


    - love that part. it flowed really well.
    nicely written.


  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 3

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    These words stuck in my head:"
    and yet those pearls will never stay.
    It broke my smile"
    I've lost some myself and I've notice that we don't show beauty in this type of loss in a lot of images, buuuut, there can be some (pardon the affordablity of the d.d.s.). Smile for me! Write on!


  • fallendust
    November 2
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    this poem is so cute and flows really well! Great write! So you lost a tooth? Is that good or bad lol