dreams felt within those memories
honored in time
velvet captivation
left within that price
tomorrows come and go
answers kneel
into that passion
leaving one only to that surrender
warmth felt within a whisper
sensuous secrets
shouldered into that truth
where i see your eyes
as we meet within the dark
beneath that closeness
where we touch
and find what we both need.
Nov. 2, 2009
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WOW! I loved the feel of this! This is so soft and sensuous. It almost made me feel like I should avert my eyes! lol... I feel dirty now must clean...
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Oh but if only ...
The better part of the world thought this way ! ... It is truly terrifyingly hard to be a Romantic , in a world that is so disturbingly coated in people who do not understand what love is in its truest forms .Grand write Viper . --.-- Do more !
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Whoa,I love this is.It's so beautiful.
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excellent job!!
Wow, very romantic. You know how to speak of love without being vulgar, and that is very rare now days. This is a goosebump type of poem. Whatever that means, but it appeals to the side of me that wants to fall in love. Great work!! Jani
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As usual a soul write that touches my heart
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