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Lost

I walk on down
the road spread out before me --
above me cold stars evanesce

And through the bends
I seek the best direction,
leading myself out of this mess

But at the end
the path is aged and crumbles --
the night sky closes in on me

And now I see,
despite my best intentions,
I've lost my only ecstasy

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  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    November 22
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    7/10

  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    November 22
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    And now I see,
    despite my best intentions,
    I've lost my only ecstasy

    Wow, really strong end to this. The beginning and end stanza were great.

    Thanks for entering.

    - blue beauty